Its was cute and smooth, But I wouldn't might being a writer for ya! I mean if you want / need one.
All points go to you on this one!
Loved it, love everything about it! I have only one problem... and thats with the Title thats it! Its just that OutLaw seems so plan? I dont know how about something like "Dust Chaser!" or ummm "Dead men walking". you get what i'm saying.... right?
Great Just Great!
But... next time for something really scary and real you should put a REALLY BIG Komodo dragon!!! OH YAA!! on top of that I just wanted to say love your work.
My eyes hurt !!
Too funny and painful to hear! just nice work, the sounds where on point!
Ok i have only 1 thing
Thats keeping you from a 10! Feelings, you need to feel your Characters! I like it i really did I don't even need the inside scoop but ... take some drama class I think you know what i mean by then. I trying to say the voices for you characters need to sound like its just happening right now! like "Oh shit I cant be he said he was going to cut me"! I that feeling I need that "This Mother&#*@ teacher did not all me over for this bull*@$*! Come on me get wild get crazy next time! I look forwad to the remake if you plan on one! Take it EZ and good luck.
I agree with xXShortEmoKidXx
I feel you rush this flash video just to see others reactions. Well you got it and now you should just go back to the drawing board. You should look over this .... flash of yours over and over again and write down some ideas that might pop to try to improve the story you've made. I'm just saying set your creative mind free and show us what you got! Look forward to the next one man. Take care.
The way you put your idea of every beat in its own characters was just amazing. I look forward to your next idea (hopefully with more Characters). Or can toss a song your way and see what you can do with it?
what are your songs like, you don't have anything uploaded? :)
I loved it the idea the way you did it was even better! I really feel you should step up the game a bit and get a team together! and make it longer, funner, and have it drawn. I mean the way you picture it of course. I look forward to seeing a remake of this and i feel it will be even better!
Thanks for the review.
The Laugh I was looking for!
I haven't laughed so hard in a long time. I mean I had to pee so badly that I was pretty sure that my testicles were sure to follow!
Now about No.6 is there going to be a 6?
My Ribs hurt!!!
Ok what or who do you work with to get the ideas that you do I mean man! Its just good stuff. Almost blamed you for wetting myself!
There's a publix just a half a mile away from my dorm. If you order baby food (which I eat as a snack) there's this bagger who'll rag on you in a very similar way.
I keep my cool too.
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